Sunday, May 16, 2010

I need help naming my wedding poem,?

Two doves perchèd upon the throne of God


Fore’er indebted in wedlock’d bond.


True love cannot be measured with a rod .


Like ripples on the Lord’s celestial pond.


Bouquet of wild aster both shall pick


In gardens, both share harvest of their love


with children who will compliment them quick


We bless them both with light from Heav’n above


As love has taken hold on man and wife


And may that bond be blessèd with glad cheer


Together they will start their Christian life


And let us not shed ev’n single tear


Loves purity is like the fallen snow


Part not until they tread where angels go.

I need help naming my wedding poem,?
Where Angels Go sounds perfect for a title. When i title my poems i like to leave my audience with something to remember. Often, the last thing said is often the first thing remembered.
Reply:Holy Unity
Reply:"To the paradise of love"
Reply:"Two Doves" comes to mind for a title. You could also just have a title like, "To [spouse] with love, from [you]."





It's a beautiful poem, by the way. God has given you a wonderful gift to be able to write as beautifully as that.
Reply:Sounds like a Sonnet. I like it. How about:





God's Blessing


God's Grace


Blessed Bond


Forever Blessed
Reply:Forever





that is soooo sweet!


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